Prickskyttefrågor

[Torak]

Sitter och skriver lite fanfic, och har en scen med en ung dam som tränar för att bli prickskytt. Behöver bara lite feedback från riktiga prickskyttar (m a o inte folk som bara spelar AS-sniper :wink: ) för att se till så det låter verklighetstroger... fast kanske med viss modifikation, det är meningen att hon ska vara nästan övernaturligt bra på det hela.

 

Vill dessutom se till så jag fick ljudeffekterna rätt.

 

Följande är vad jag skrivit än så länge (har kopierat hela scenen för att få lite sammanhang i det hela):

 

Ron caught him as he headed into the field.

 

“Harry, mate,” he said, dropping an arm around Harry’s shoulders. “You see that dinner plate on the other side of the field?”

 

Harry squinted; the field was a good half-mile square, and it was a very small plate. But he soon saw the tiny glint of white porcelain and nodded.

 

“Yeah, I see it.”

 

“Wander over to it. Luna’s got something to show you. Oh, and take this flag with you.”

 

Harry caught the little green paper flag on its bit of dowelling as Ron thrust it at him.

 

“Um… Ron? Have you been at the doxy pills in the shed?”

 

Ron’s grin was now dangerously wide, and he clearly had something up his sleeve.

 

“Just go over there, Harry. You’ll see.”

 

Harry raised an eyebrow, but set off across the field.

 

Luna’s got something to show me? In a field? He looked around, trying to spot her, but without luck. The field was empty, with only the china plate half-buried in the longish grass at one end. As he grew closer, he spotted a small square of cardboard beside it.

 

Suddenly there was a sharp, dry crack! in the air in front of him as a vapour trail imploded two inches from his nose. A fraction of a second later, a thunderous explosion rolled across the field and echoed back past him. Acting on instinct, he dived to the ground, rolled and drew his wand.

 

“Bloody hell!” he exclaimed, glancing frantically around, half-expecting to see a swarm of Death Eaters approaching. But Ron still stood grinning by the gate, arms crossed.

 

“Harry!” he shouted. “Hold up the flag!”

 

“What the hell’s going on?” Harry bellowed back, lifting his head up from where he lay pressed into the grass.

 

“Just stand up and hold up the flag!”

 

Gingerly, Harry stood, his eyes nervously scanning the field.

 

He raised his arm, holding the flag by the very end of the stick.

 

The same dry crack zipped past him again, followed by the same rolling blast.

 

The flag, along with the top half of the dowel, dropped to the ground.

 

He brought his hand down and stared, wide-eyed, at the ragged, slightly scorched stub.

 

“Bloody hell…” he whispered slowly. He looked up towards Ron, who was still standing with a broad smirk on his face.

 

“Okay, Harry, take twenty steps directly away from me!”

 

Harry was no longer up to arguing, and did so. Five more reports blasted out across the field.

 

“Where’s that noise coming from?” he shouted across to Ron.

 

“From Luna!”

 

Harry stormed back across the field, meeting Ron about halfway.

 

“All right, Ron, enough messing about, where is she?”

 

Ron just grinned, and a quiet voice drifted up from below him.

 

“Harry, could you just step back a bit?”

 

He looked down. It was grass. There were a few leaves, a thistle, and three dandelions. But mostly, it was grass. Like everything else in the field.

 

Then the ground stood up.

 

Harry blinked rapidly, realising that his eyes had been bulging for so long that they had started to dry up.

 

“Luna?”

 

Under the grass, beneath a mossy cowl, lay a black and green face. It was barely distinguishable as a face, set off as it was only by the grin filled with shiny white teeth and the wide, almost luminous eyes. The walking compost heap held a long stick of twigs and moss; now that he knew what to look for, Harry could just make out the muzzle of the rifle at one end.

 

Vad sägs, låter det ungefär rätt? Vad är ungefär maxavstånd för en riktigt bra skytt för att skjuta entumsgrupper med 7.62 (ukal och "vanlig")?

[Danne]

Frågan är väl snarare om du kan undvika Mrs Rowlings advokater

[Honken]

Vad jag har förstått så är fanfic ganska harmlöst.

 

Det skrivs hyllmeter på hyllmeter med Star Trek fanfic till exempel. Inte hört några klagomål där än i alla fall.

 

Blir kanske värre om man ger ut det som en egen bok ;)

[Torak]

Äsch, Rowling har sagt att hon inte har nåt emot fanfic - läser tydligen en hel del själv - så länge det inte är alltför... hrm... grafiskt.

 

Men som sagt, det är själva informationen jag försöker få rätt - någon?

[Harald]

Vad sägs, låter det ungefär rätt? Vad är ungefär maxavstånd för en riktigt bra skytt för att skjuta entumsgrupper med 7.62 (ukal och "vanlig")?

 

Även om man ibland skjuter hål i hål så beror det inte på skjutskicklighet. Särskilt inte om man använder 7,62 normalprojektil eller PRICK ammunition (ukal). Skruva fast vapnet i ett skruv städ i en kontrollerad miljö utan vind och du kommer ändå inte skjuta konstant inom 2,5cm på flera hundra meter. Som kuriosa kan nämnas att PRICK am har en större spridning än normalprojektil.

[scattergun]

Har för mig att specen på normalproj. är två centimeters egenspridning på hundra, lägg sedan till vapnets spridning, vindavdrift och annat skräp så kommer du inte att kunna hålla dig under en tum på mycket längre håll än hundra...åtminstone om du vill vara helt säker.